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-Storm Inside- Heavy valves chug black blood..
capillaries thick
with coming thunder.

Dark rains
dont bring clarity.
Sopping buildings
fall inward.

Implode my chest.

Wet earth
between fingers.
Maggots crawl, feeding upon
soggy cotton candy
and brick.

No new life
crawls forward.
The dirty things die.
And I die.

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-Saturn's Rings-

by ~cubesix

Saturn's rings encircle me in dust,
A subtle layer of grime.
I do not sparkle.

My eyes grow dull and blurry.
I suffocate upon atomic debris,
My lungs coated in a thick film.

Wheezing,
I cough into space
Silently.
No one shall hear these desperate cries.
I will burn and wither away,
Just another star
Lost in a galaxy of sparks.

-Saturn's Rings-by ~cubesix

Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Free Verse

:: A melancholy time in my life..

[ Poem created Dec 30, 2004. ]

~deadetiquette Oct 20, 2007

_{Very nice. I particularly like the "atomic debris" - I never would have thought of that.

It's almost too bad that it's so short. Bravo.}

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_{"Nowadays a broken heart will run to many editions." -Lord Henry Wotton}

~cubesix Oct 21, 2007 Hobbyist Writer

Thank you for the feedback, deadet, happy you liked it. Its rare that I write anything longer than this.. Difficult for my mind to stay on track.

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~deadetiquette Oct 21, 2007

_{Perhaps we both need to relax. lol You're very welcome.}

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_{"Nowadays a broken heart will run to many editions." -Lord Henry Wotton}

~Flipworks Aug 14, 2007

cool

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It is good to have an end to journey towards, but it is the journey that matters, in the end. 'unchi'

`HaveTales-WillTell Mar 28, 2007 Professional Writer

There's some good imagery here. I especially like the bluntness of lines like "I do not sparkle."

I've tried pursuing happiness. Happiness sought a restraining order.

~Kavarria Mar 24, 2007 Hobbyist General Artist

ooohh..i like this...nice

~unjustified Mar 16, 2007

good work here, has a stong feeling of insignificance to it. well done.

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stripped from hard flesh
my trunk is carved through.
like an empty pit, my heart has become
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